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Hallo! Happy Fourth of Jul-oh wait. that was yesterday. oops! Anyway! a lot of people wonder how i can do all of these WIPs without cutting into my valuable commission work time. Well, you see, there's a method to my madness. Generally i never work on any one thing for too long: I work on many things at once, both as a way to keep my attention on something (as a friend once kindly pointed out, i have the attention span of a squirell on PCP [Which is where i got my fictional company name PCP Productions from}) and as a way to get keep my interest up. if i work on ONE thing for too long, i get bored of it BEFORE i'm finished. So! that's why i work on these WIPS inbetween all the Commissioned work! And now you KNOWWWWWWWWWW!

ANYWAY: this is an update to this WIP [link]! I went through, and tried my best to make some critical changes, as well as listen to your advice. Also, a few of these are pretty much finished, but I'm showing them here to get your input, as well as to look for errors or flaws. Onward to the changes!



1)Livewire: Some major changes here. I completely redid her costume texture, as well as adding the skinboots that you lot have seen on some of my newer pics(thanks goes to :iconoshikai: for those!) I also did some minor changes to her face, and hair, as well as slimming her body down by a LOT. I call this one pretty much FINISHED, unless you guys got some serious issues.

2)Giganta: I mostly did minor changes between here and my Last WIP for Giganta. I rejiggered the bodysuit materials, as well as trying to give her a more mixed race skin tone. I'm not sure that the skin tone really WORKS tho, which is why I'm showing it now. A note: i DIDN'T change her face at all, thats just the skintone showing the features differently. I don't think Giganta is really done yet, but i think she's CLOSE, which is more than could be said last month.

3)Mercy Graves: Ooh Boy. I REALLY changed her for this. In point of fact, i used a completely new Character for the Face/Body(my rarely used Siera character), as well as rejiggering the costume. I redid the costume materials, as well as adding in the gun harness that my mate Oshikai did. This is another finished one, methinks, if only cus i really, REALLY like this.

4)Ice: FINALLY gave Ice a new face, as well as a new haircut. I tried to keep what people were telling me in mind, and used a haircut with straight bangs. Its not REALLY my thing, but i'm forced to Conclude that it DOES work well for her. I also flaired the fur on her boots, as well as did some minor changes to her body. I THINK that is finished, but i'm not sure.

5)Fire: Another girl i COMPLETELY redid. Not only did i redo her face, but i also redid her costume as well as her Hair. I'm actually pretty pleased with how this came out, as i didn't much care for Fire's original design. So i'm happy i managed to do a GOOD redesign. My only issue here is the skintone. As i've said before, i suck at making good, ethnic skintones, so i'm not sure this screams Brazilian/Latino. Other than that, i think that she's finished as well.

6)Stargirl: So, i concluded after some thought, that due to the fact that i NEVER USED HER, i must dislike my stargirl. So i set about trying to make her more interesting, and HERE WE AREEEEEEE. I'm actually REALLY happy with her, though i imagine some folks won't be cus of her increased super-sexiness. But! despite all evidence to the contrary, she's still 18! really! its wut her ID says! >.>
Anyway, i think she's done as well, tho i'll listen to any issues you guys might have.

7)Classic Black Canary: I made some minimal changes to Black Canary I. I rejiggered her corset, so you know, it looked like a corset, and actually managed to make her breasts look properly pushed up(which took HOURS of work. A word of advice: its HARD capturing soft squeezy flesh in 3D. REALLY FUCKING HARD). i also added the Gunholster, as well, and got rid of the Jacketcuffs. I think that she MIGHT need new boots, but I'm unsure. Overall tho, i'm in love ^_^.

8)Superwoman: A new girl! or well, a new costume for Supergirl. This was done as part of a commission for kclcmdr. i THINK i did well in capturing the source image [Link], though i DID have to take some liberties to make the costume work in 3D. The cleavage isn't as well visible here as it is in the source image, and there's a red tinge to the blue that i couldn't QUITE get rid of, but overall I'm fairly happy with how this came out.

So! I'm going to try to ease off on the WIPs for the time being. I have new (and old T_T) commissions to do, as well as some art of my own. So this SHOULD be the last WIP for at least a few weeks. Enjoy! And follow the rules >.< i'm serious this time! i WILL HIDE ALL NON-CRITICAL COMMENTS.

A couple of rules before you critique!
1) since these are WIPS, and i'm posting them STRICTLY for the purpose of critique, i WILL hide any and all comments that are non-critical. No arguments, since the SOLE PURPOSE of these WIPs is to collect critique.

2) If you think that you cannot comment before you don't know 3D, then just treat as if i drew them, and ignore the fact that their 3D. If something cannot be done because its 3D, well, thats MY problem, isn't it?

3)Feel free to be as vicious as you need to be! I'd rather have brutal honesty then kind lies!

4)Please don't submit this to Groups! Its a WORK IN PROGRESS. I will DENY any group submissions for WIPS!

PS: As i Look at this, i'm wondering if i shouldn't give Giganta's skintone to to Fire, as it seems to say "Latino" beter than "mixed race." Thoughts?
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*theEyZmaster Feb 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
Your model of Ice is so pretty :'3
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!IndestructibleHugo Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Mercy Looks especially great on this! Even as a kid, I would be slightly turned on by how short that dress/skirt was.
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:iconmercblue22:
Simply outstanding pic PeterC!
Another great render featuring some great Superheroines. From Black Canary to FIRE to Stargirl, some of my favs, woohoo!

Fantastic pic PC, thanks for sharing. ^^
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:iconshank70:
I must say that I am impressed! You're Ice is possibly the best version that I've ever seen. She really makes me hope for a Petey version of Dove in the near future. I really like your version of Stargirl. As you have already stated that she's over 18, the small shorts are a vast improvement on the crappy 90's biker shorts she's been stuck with. I like the bigger star on the older costume, but all-in-all I hope this version prompts you to use her more. As for Superwoman, I'm a fan of the high-cut costume bottom. I think a character like your Terra could really benefit from a look like this!
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~vamptod Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah man awesome !
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:iconwookieeengineer:
Isn't Stargirl
something like 15 years old? I'd like a little more material on the bottom. Other than that, looks good.
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Mood: Delighted ~Druce-White-Owl Jul 6, 2011  Professional Writer
I'm not digging the bob on Stargirl, it gives her too much of a Hit-Girl feeling IMO. Would it be possible to make it less bob and more of a shaggy cut? It's cute short but here it feels so "been there, done that" and I think it detracts from her overall look. Let her stick out a little more, a shaggy, less stylized cut will give her more of a youthful care free feeling.

Still totally loving Giganta's hair, and this may be the first time I've seen Mercy in FanArt, I like it; even in a static pose her attitudes nicely captured here. She's sexy looking but it's a very "professional hitman" kind of sexiness that suits her well.

I know the Superwoman look was a commission one, but if you plan to use the look yourself in the future I'd really say steer away from the lycra look. When the costumes that rubbery and shiny it gives off too much of a cheap halloween costume vibe. That said, the style itself is snappy and sexy, I like it!
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:iconreddragon162:
I love your Stargirl, all her super cute and sexiness. Her tiny little shorts, and even with those huge soles on her boots shes still the shortest one there.

That shirt that Ice is wearing is the ultimate in sexy.

I was never really a fan of the bodysuit Giganta wears, even with it unzipped down to her cooch. I much more prefer the one shoulder top and ragged skirt look with bare feet.

The smoldering sexiness of Livewire makes her my favorite of this bunch.
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*cwichura Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Best of the lot is Ice. That outfit is just awesome. Hopefully you'll do some proper images of just her once you're happy with the design.

I also like Livewire, but that deep open V in the outfit kinda demands larger mamage...
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:iconmikelego226:
I really like the route you're going with Giganta and Stargirl.
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