WIP - 10 WIP Roundup Two

So! as i've said before, i work on many things at once, often times switching between subjects as my attention wanders. So, HERE, is another roundup of my lastest WIPS. Two of these should be familar, being the subject of two commissioned pieces (unless i have the permission of the commissioner, or i think they wouldn't mind, i'll most likely hesitate to post WIPS of commissioned work), but the rest should be relatively new.

SO!

First up, Left to Right!

Supergirl Messings Results:
This is wut came out of WIP-7. I like the feel of the short boots alongside the long tights and short skirt, but after DC came out with their REBOOT, i had a hankering to stick to my classic Supergirl costume for now. i WILL most likely do a pinup featuring this costume, if only for Fun.

PinkLantern Wonder Woman!

Now, i KNOW that their REALLY violet lanterns, but since this is MY universe, and craving a connection between the Two, i decided that in MY universe, Pink Lanterns use Pink Kryptonite as their power source. (also, her costume was NOT violet in the comic, it WAS pink >.<) Anyway! enjoy this clearer view of it!

Agent Danny Wednesday:

One of my OC's, Danny is almost as old as Claire, artwise. i haven't had a chance to do TOO much with her, but hopefully this will change as i try to incorporate her into my Superhero OC world. I was really trying for a cross between sexy secret agent, and compotent combantant.

Black Mary Marvel:

I am honestly NOT sure if i wanna Keep this character. I don't much care for Mary Marvel or Captain Marvel normally, finding them far too squeaky clean to be interesting (tho i DID enjoy Alex Ross's one shot Shazam Comic). And whilst i like the costume (one piece latex skirt? AWESOME) i haven't been able to make up a good character BEYOND the costume. So either i'll make up a seperate story for her, or get rid of her altogether.

Scarlet Witch:

Man, this came out a LOT better than i thought it would. i honestly wasn't sure of this costume at first, but then after much tweaking i managed to find a good cross between my own views and the comic look. I plan to do more with her, once i get a few more Avenger's done.

The Question:

As i've said, Renee's done, barring the Mask. i took after cully hamner's sketch work(which i don't remember where i saw, but its out there somewhere), trying to get a cross between Androgeny and sexy. My view is she's more of a Noir character than the Main Stream version, being a cross between the Rick Veitch 2005 miniseries, a female Harry Dresden, and the JLU Animated verison. She's relies more on her detective work then the DCU version, only using her Martial Chopsocky or the Urban Shamanism (which is one of my favorite parts of the character, and which i'm sad not more people used) when she needs to.

ANYWAY!

ENJOY MY WIPS! i'll be sure to try to get some NON-commissioned art done, once i finish a few more commissions.

SO! a couple of notes before you critique!
1) since these are wips and i am posting them STRICTLY for the purpose of critique, i WILL hide any comment that is just 'nice job!' or 'that loooks great!'. no arguments, cus i'm posting these to GET critique, as opposed to my normal art.

2) if you think you can't comment cus you don't know 3D, just treat them as if i drew them, and ignore the fact that their 3D. if something can't be done cus its 3D, well, thats MY problem, not yours.

3) feel free to be as vicious as you need to be! i'd rather have brutal honesty then kind lies!

4) also, in case its not obvious, i'm looking for crits on the COSTUME, and the BODY. the face WILL change, so i'll prolly ignore crits there, at least until i start working on it.

oh yeah, PLEASE don't submit this to groups! its a WIP!

Characters are (C) to their respective owners!